The DCU Engineering
Society Invite you to come
along our scavenger hunt
should be
The DCU Engineering
Society Invite you to come
along to our scavenger
hunt
...
Don’t get lost! Familiarise
yourself with the campus
by taking part in this
specially designed event
I would change to
Don’t get lost! Familiarise
yourself with the campus
by taking part in this
event specially
designed for you
And I would probably make the About DCU EngSoc header
bigger and more defined (easier to read)
Sent: Thursday, June 09, 2011 1:45 PM
Subject: [Engsoc-Committee] Flyer
Hey
Guys,
Okay so the majority of people thought B was the best template so we will
go with that.
There was a lot of differences between what exactly should be the wording
of the flyer so I kept it short and sweet and kept it to the bare minimum of
what the flyer is supposed to inform the students and there's bullet points a
plenty.
- Headings: Our logo and the text "Engineering Society" is at the top of the
page. The main heading within the body is "Scavenger hunt"
- About the scavenger hunt: I invited the students to the scavenger hunt
then briefly explained that it is designed to help them find their way around
campus in bullet form.
- About EngSoc: I used the phrase "Come and meet the Engineering Society and
find out about DCU from people who really know about it" and invited them to
join our facebook page.
- Time, Date and Place
Is everyone happy with this? It seems we're not all going to agree 100% on
every aspect of the flyer and time is not on our sides right now. I personally
would be happy sending in this flyer.
Any thoughts on this matter welcomed.
Kind Regards,
Tom